Date: 08/02/10 18:14:21 Title: Chapter 6
Loved it didn't find it to sappy. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 07/27/10 21:05:24 Title: Chapter 6
very cute but were there any reprecusions from john's attack
Date: 07/27/10 21:02:42 Title: Chapter 5
wondering what the reprecusions will be
Date: 07/27/10 21:01:28 Title: Chapter 4
that's sad. she must be drugged to forget the man who raped her and could have hurt her unborn child isn't jack
Date: 07/27/10 20:59:10 Title: Chapter 3
well i think it's an interesting twist and hope to see more soon




[Report This]Date: 07/26/10 20:20:27 Title: Chapter 6
Great Ending....I hope this is going to lead into a sequel !!! Great story keep up the great work !!!!




[Report This]Date: 07/25/10 22:05:30 Title: Chapter 6
And we hear the
as Jack passes out!
Great ending. The story needed a little more to round it out! Always in for a sequal to an interesting story!




[Report This]Date: 07/25/10 18:43:56 Title: Chapter 6
seqqqqeeaaalll awesome chapter brilliant ending




[Report This]Date: 07/25/10 12:09:15 Title: Chapter 5
Yeeeaaa lol not saying to much as others haven't read it yet
but poor clone John/Jack please update soon




[Report This]Date: 07/22/10 12:29:01 Title: Chapter 4
i wasn't expecting that, i hope Jack finds them before it is too late. More Please

