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Reviews For Whiskey
Reviewer: ziva Signed 
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Date: 07/29/10 8:02:07 Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 07/29/10 8:02:07 Title: Chapter 1
Great use of this episode and of this particular scene. I always hated that they were interrupted by Daniel and Teal'c, didn't you? Your writing needs just a little tweaking to be perfect. Another pair of eyes might help. Keep writing. I would like to read more of your work.
Author's Response: Well this particular scene was never really revised. In the notes I put that it was for the Day of Indulgence and over at my LJ I explain it a little more - I wanted to write a dark!fic but I couldn't make it work so this was the only scene that happened. I posted it more for entertainment value with little more than a once over for grammar. Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: Elle Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 21:13:56 Title: Chapter 1
Date: 07/27/10 21:13:56 Title: Chapter 1
the ending to this was so sad it made me want to cry. i don't know if your planning on continuing this but i would love to see where you could take this story
Author's Response: Maybe one day. I have happier stories. It left me rather sad too.
Reviewer: Gen Varel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/10 6:54:56 Title: Chapter 1
Date: 07/27/10 6:54:56 Title: Chapter 1
Intense! Very good! Screams for a sequel. What happens between them when she finds out the truth? I'm dying to know about that conversation.
Author's Response: That was sort of why this ended up a one shot - I wanted to write something wicked for the Day of Indulgence at LJ but... well... this was all my muse would give me. I figure I'll let it simmer in the back of my mind and come back to it at a later date. :)
Reviewer: siler Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 16:44:31 Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 07/25/10 16:44:31 Title: Chapter 1
Holy smokes....now he's in a jam...
Author's Response:
I know! Thanks for reading. :)
Reviewer: samcarter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 11:50:43 Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 07/25/10 11:50:43 Title: Chapter 1
Very intense chapter, I think you should do a follow up for this especially for what Sam is probably now feeling. So if you need some ideas i will be happy to give you some, just email me when you feel ready to write it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the offer. It maybe a long time coming though - I have a ton of other stories and things on my plate! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Iggyming Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 11:30:25 Title: Chapter 1
Date: 07/25/10 11:30:25 Title: Chapter 1
Wow, very intense! I agree with you -- I'm not sure how Sam and Jack could fix their relationship after an encounter like that. I'd like to think that they would somehow find a way, though. Good job!
Author's Response: I know >.< I'd like to think they could too. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Patricia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 10:09:44 Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: That's my problem! LOL I wrote this for Day of Indulgence and the indulgence for me is that I have *no* idea how you fix something like this. I generally don't write a story that I can't imagine the afterward part :S Maybe one day if I think long and hard about it... Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 07/25/10 10:09:44 Title: Chapter 1
Wow! powerful but short story. I'd like to see the follow up to this when he has to try and make his team work again after the mission - begging for a part 2!
Author's Response: That's my problem! LOL I wrote this for Day of Indulgence and the indulgence for me is that I have *no* idea how you fix something like this. I generally don't write a story that I can't imagine the afterward part :S Maybe one day if I think long and hard about it... Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: paredpuppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/10 9:21:22 Title: Chapter 1
Date: 07/25/10 9:21:22 Title: Chapter 1
Great job on this!
Author's Response: Thanks!
